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Fantasy Writing Discussions June 17, 2013

  • Cities, towns and villages
    I am making a map of my world and right now I am working on the human kingdom how many cities towns and villages should i have in a kingdom, I do not…
  • Writing the Ideal…Magic-User
    So I’m continuing this “series” of questions to get insight in to how members feel about their ideal versions of certain types of characters. First I…
  • Does A Story Need A Main Character?
    I never would have thought I’d be asking this question, but in my current story there’s a bunch of different characters performing different parts of…
  • Real locations
    I often find places that give inspiration to locations that I write into my works. I like to let nature take me to my world.  Do any of you do…
  • Historical, mythological and public domain warriors?
    I’m not sure if I should put this in World Building or Research so I’m putting here because it’s the first place I clicked on.  A WIP I have in…
  • Bringing in the villain
    Hi everyone! I’m wondering when is a good entrance for the villain into the story? Should he/she be paired with the problem? Many thanks!
  • Writing the Ideal…Barbarian
    I’d like to posit these ideas every so often to maybe get other writers discussing what it takes to write your ideal version of a character type.
  • Sticking it Out
    I’ve posted about this before and even wrote articles for the main site about this topic. But it becomes increasingly hard some days to stick with my…
  • Characters you can relate to?
    I read an essay not long ago in which the author explained why the major characters in his novels were all deliberately written as ordinary. …
  • What is a “strong” character?
    What, in your view, makes for a strong character? Is it different depending on if the character is male or female? Are there things that would…

Fantasy Writing Discussions June 10, 2013

  • Character Portraits
    I’m not too sure how many other writers do this, but we collect pictures out of magazines and off the internet as inspiration for our characters. …
  • “They’ll Never Take Our Freedom”?
    I’ve been thinking about my sequel series a lot recently. I just have a few problems so far.  I’m actually writing a book on how Kaiyumian alchemy…
  • Setting the scene.
    I recently started writing on my first bigger project. I’m writing it scene by scene and I find that for each and every scene I spend an…
  • Nature Avatars
    I like the idea of nature spirits and kami, but I don’t like the idea of 8 Million magic monsters possibly interfering with the story. So, I came up…
  • I’m wondering about accents
    I have a character who is Irish…. hundreds of years old from Ireland Irish.  My question is do I write the character with an accent? It’s seem a…
  • A Post-it Punch Please
    Can someone, meaning anyone and everyone, give me a quick-post punch to the head?  While revising my WiP and feeling an un-nameable drag the cure…
  • Likable character to an unlikable character
    Apologies if this topic has been covered before.  In my current WIP there is a main character (also a Pov) who starts off almost as the cliche…
  • Teleportation
    In my work in progress the antagonist, and later the protagonist, are able to teleport/warp from one place to another via powerful magic. The thing is that…
  • the best way to interrupt a dialogue
    The scene is, you have one group of people, the group of the MC, talking in a tavern, in the background, that is another groups talking, none aware…
  • Old friends with significant backstory, or new acquaintance with limited investment?
    I’m making another attempt at writing a story I’d earlier set aside as difficult to write. One of the problems that keeps tripping me up is that much…
  • What are you looking for in a writer?
    I enjoy reading. If it’s a choice between a good book and almost anything else, I’ll take the good book. When I’m in the middle of such a read,…

Fantasy Writing Discussions June 3, 2013

  • Getting in the mood to write
    I’ve been finding myself not wanting to write every time try to write my story. I just stare at the screen and then close Word, and go thru the…
  • Combat based magic system?
    Thinking about a relatively simple magic system for my novel that is mainly combat based and that’s is not overly complicated, and wondered what…
  • Would it be too confusing to use fictional quotes?
    As my story begins 10,000 years after an apocalyptic event in 2058, many of the novels and religious books that people quote will be fictitious….
  • Where does writing fit into your life?
    So I’m curious about the role writing takes on in your life as individuals and the overall makeup of the Mythic Scribes community through the lens of…
  • RIP Jack Vance
    Jack Vance, a true legend in sci-fi and fantasy passed away over the weekend. He was 96. It’s a shame, I feel, that Vance isn’t mentioned with…
  • How to spell my evil queen’s name
    I’ve got an unnecessarily complicated problem about how I should spell the main antagonist’s name in my book. Brace yourselves.  So, I have an…
  • Does this seem like a good background for my villain?
    In my most recent WIP my main villain is called Lilith, based after the character from the bible. In the bible, Lilith was the first partner of Adam,…
  • Does this sound good for my plot?
    This is for a novel I am writing. Thanks for taking the time to read this, if you would like to know some background on this please read my previous…

Fantasy Writing Discussions May 27, 2013

  • Advanced Technology in a Fantasy Setting
    I am currently exploring the world my story takes place in, and hit something of a roadblock.  There is an underlying aspect of the story that to…
  • Trouble describing something
    One of the characters in my WIP is a human guy named Ailín who possesses the Sight, which allows him to see through Fae Glamour and, in a very…
  • Chapter length
    OK, so in my WIP the chapters tend to be fairly long, around 7K words. But at the moment the chapter i am working on is approaching 10K. Is this…
  • Changing your Main Character
    I’ve had an idea for a while now in my WIP, to kill off my main character half way through the story. His death wouldn’t be pointless, it would have…
  • What is considered ‘Language’
    I’m writing a story where two people who are close are having an argument. It’s is heated and both are quite the characters, not likely to…
  • What monsters eat (or, how filling is a caravan?)
    It’s one of the most commonly fudged parts of a world: how much does a monster have to eat?  In a real-world ecology there’s only so much…
  • Food on the road – what to take and forage for during travel
    I was looking at the fantasy writer’s quiz and saw the comment about on-road stews and how they are unrealistic and a…
  • Economy – does this work?

    I had to create a economic system for this city and from the looks of it now, it seems to work. My…
  • A Docking Dilemma
    In one of my worlds there are five moons for the planet. Along with important theological/philosophical changes to the evolution of the cultures on…

Fantasy Writing Discussions May 20, 2013

Fantasy Writing Discussions May 13, 2013

  • The other POV
    When most writers begin writing a story they worry about whether it’s best in first or third person. They spend little time wondering about which…
  • Overly influenced by RPGs
    I think I’ve lost my mind. I’m working on the third book of my series, and like many fantasy writers, my characters and settings are heavily…
  • How to have characters with distinctive personalities
    I don’t want every character to have the same dialogue or same reaction to events, I want every character to stand out from each other. I also would…
  • What to do when grammar gets you down.
    I’ve been getting feedback on my work. Story is solid, but the grammar and use of adjectives needs work. My trouble with commas is getting me…
  • World magic based on music
    So, I know that there are a lot of threads posted about magic, and here I am adding to yet another one, but there are so many interesting and…
  • When the ‘bad guy’ does the homework
    I’m developing further an old idea/plot and I’ve became stuck in a important point. So, let me explain.
    That is three people, cursed with…
  • Travel: 101
    I have a minor hiccup in my story at the moment. After spending a lot of time walking, hiking, sneaking… to the climax of the story, I am needed to…
  • Robert Jordan and his prologues
    This is more of a rant than anything else, but I could never figure out how Robert Jordan decided what should go in a prologue and what should go in…
  • Too many ideas
    I’m in the planning stage, I have a notebook that I take everywhere with me to jot down ideas. Recently I’ve landed on one that I really like the…
  • Fixing a country wracked by civil war
    I won’t get to this story for a while, but I’ve been thinking about it recently, and there’s no harm in laying the groundwork. The story involves a…
  • Providing Background info
    I need help with this. I’m having a hard time trying to tell the reader background information without dragging them out of the story. Here’s the…

Fantasy Writing Discussions May 6, 2013

  • Poem for the Dead
    I have a scene where a minor character passes away and the remaining characters have a moment of silence in respect I want one character to sing a…
  • The Mechanics of Short Story Writing (The Ending)
    I came across this good article on how to approach short story…
  • How many trilogies?
    I’ve been having a lot of Gods of War questions for some reason.  My original plan was to make the series a total of 3 trilogies with “Gods of…
  • Dying in a dream
    I’m writing about a dreamworld right now and I just have a few questions that I could use help with. All I’ll say is there are a good few people in…
  • Fantasy birth control talk
    I’m working on a fantasy novel containing a romance, which includes sex. Quite often in novels, I note that the guy and girl tend to just go for it…
  • How to talk about your imaginary world
    Recently i posted a question about the magic in my world. Minutes after posting it someone called the question stupid and at first I was like Oh mah…
  • Cool characters, no plot worth squat
    Have you ever designed characters you thought were really awesome and had a lot of potential, only to end up stumped on how to bring them to life in…
  • Magic question
    Magic can be molded into different forms. Each form has a different demand, like say storm magic is more taxing than wisp magic and each has a…
  • Fantasy Fashion
    I was thinking of making this forum a kind of game. Post links to or of fashion pictures or nature if you would like me to mix the clothing with…

Fantasy Writing Discussions April 29, 2013

  • A few punctuation questions
    Because I suck with punctuation.  Is there a difference between types of ellipses and dashes?  I see a lot of books using “. . .” and I’m using…
  • Having the same ideas?
    I’m interested to see to what extent copyright can be used in books, in terms with naming places and people etc. I drew up my fantasy map a year ago…
  • Thoughts and comments on my story plan.
    I wanted to get an idea of what others thought about my concept and preliminary story plan for the first book in the series—I had originally intended…
  • Maid and the Butler
    Dialogue is something I struggle with more than anything in writing, and it’s not that I can’t write good dialogue, it’s just I don’t plan what the…
  • Writing in 3rd POV
    We are supposed to be describing are story through our character’s pov but it is not in first person. Since it is in third would it be acceptable to…
  • Synonyms for a War Band
    My story is set in a sort of post apocalyptic setting and the world is full of cannibalistic savages who travel/hunt together to stay alive. When I…
  • Help with a trans* character?
    I have this character, let’s call her Hannah, who is a transgender woman. She has a conflict that relates to her gender, indirectly, but it doesn’t…
  • Help! Where should my novel start?
    As of right now I have the first 26 chapters of my novel outlined and ready to go (adding in foreshadowing, symbolism, etc. each day). I’m stuck at…
  • Philosophies In Your Writing
    It is no secret that I hold Steven Erikson in high regard. In his latest novel, The Forge of Darkness, Steven Erikson lays thick various…
  • I need some climate/meteorological help!
    On my world there is a magically created desert about 450 miles across where the average daytime temperature is about 20 degrees (F) higher than the…
  • How much detail is too much?
    I my second book, “The Night and Day”, my main character, Arylos, has to teach my secondary character, Iris, how to perform Alchemy in order to…

Fantasy Writing Discussions April 22, 2013

  • Favorite Fantasy Creature (or Creatures)
    I do not know about you, but one of my favorite things about fantasy would have to be all of the different creatures and beasts that inhabit it. I…
  • Transitioning from light to dark
    In its current draft, Equivalence begins with seven pages of character interaction and four of lining up plot dominoes. I could probably pare that…
  • I’m going to make a Dwarf epic
    Dwarves. I mean a story largely written from their perspective, through their culture, with their own unique traits. I want to make a civilization…
  • To be (the royal we) or…you get the point.
    OK, I just would like to ask why so much fantasy fiction seems to be based on Kings and Queens, (or moreso unknowing foundling princes and…
  • Myths Inscribed #2
    I’m not sure if there’s already a thread on this, but I just finished reading “The Diablarist” and I loved it. I would love to read more from that…
  • POV, Names and Descriptors
    I have a bit of a problem in the current scene of my latest WIP. The POV character has taken a man captive to torture him out of misguided revenge,…
  • A Question of (Too) Graphic?
    —Quote—
    Eidungruve was an obscenity. The rows of rotting heads had served as meals for the ravens, but there were too many of them to eat all. …
  • Humorous scene
    The main plot in my WIP is a secret organisation trying to assassinate the MC. I want to make one of those attempts end up being…
  • Why do we care? Is it really that important?
    I have had a dilemma for the longest time. Basically, it is wondering why many writers actually worry about what genre the finished product will end…
  • Writing two stories at once?

    I’m currently rewriting the first half of my WIP (it was terrible to be honest) which is planned to be a trilogy. I have many other…
  • 10 People You Don’t Want to Meet at a Writer’s Group

    Ten People You Don’t Want to Meet at a Writer’s Group…

Fantasy Writing Discussions April 15, 2013

  • Dissatisfaction in my work
    It’s something that has plagued me for the last few weeks, I only began writing my story a month or so ago, and now a couple of chapters in, I am…
  • Novel vs Screenplay?
    I was wondering, how unrealistic is it to sell a screenplay to a studio or production team? I’m pretty interested that I could perhaps…
  • Reader’s age VS Character age
    I’ve been thinking about this the last few days, especially after my kid sister just came home with a bag full of Nancy Drew books…
  • E-books Now 22% of US Publishers’ Revenue
    AAP reports e-books now account for over 22 percent of US publishers’ revenue…
  • My faceless antagonist
    I’m having a crisis of faith at the moment and need someone to talk me off my mental ledge.  Without miring everyone in endless details, my WIP…
  • Terry Goodkind self publishing
    Found it interesting that a big name author is going self pub.  Bestselling fantasy author Terry Goodkind is self-publishing his next novel,…
  • My beginning is bugging me.
    I’ve come to a bit of impasse. The more I analyze it the more I doubt the beginning I’ve created. It’s only the first chapter or two I’m concerned…
  • Movies, a bad influence?
    I’ve started writing out a few chapters of my story, to find that perhaps my writing has taken it’s toll from too many movies. It’s fine normally but…
  • What themes or motifs do you see popping up in your writing a lot?
    I realised recently that wild roses appear in my writing a lot. Initially they were something associated with an immortal character I wrote a novel…
  • Opinion on a character
    This is kind of an opinion thing and I’d like a few responses to help me in plotting.  In my first book, “Gods of War”, Arylos, the…