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Some cover samples I made

Yukinara

Dreamer
These are a few covers I made for my upcoming book. It's an action/scifi/romance novel. So far I'm happy with the background but not sure about the sword. In my novel, the light sword play an important role but I'm not sure what design I should use so I need some feed back
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Devor

Fiery Keeper of the Hat
Moderator
Number 2 looks better. But you need to darken the colors, they're overpowering.
 
Yukinara said:
what do you mean by "too busy"?

The bottom, I can't tell what that is supposed to be. There are too many points of white swirling around, and the neon effect title gets lost in the background.
 
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