Cover Criticism Needed!

[Helleaven]

Hi Everyone. I am pretty much new to this site but I found it useful than I expected.

Like many in this site, I'm writing a fantasy novel and my first volume will be finished soon.

Since I don't have any money (I've just graduated from university), I am trying to make a "not-so-terrible" looking book cover to send it to the publishers along with my manuscript.

I would like to read your opinions about the cover and what it needs to be better.

I know it's such an amateur work, I know it even may look terrible, but that's the point of opening this thread

The cover title is Turkish.

"Tanrıların Sessizliği" means "The Silence of the Gods".

"Darion Elderia" is my protagonist.

There is a gauntlet on the cover, which is important for the story.

I want it to plain and simple but attractive at the same time, the use of gauntlet is important, so with this guide lines, what kind of a cover would you suggest for me to use? What would you do if this was your cover? Make it more colourful or make it a little busier?

Ask any questions you got and they shall be answered

Thanks in advance


FINAL EDIT:

Update: Fixed the grammar issue

And yes! Finally I have finished fixing it. Please tell me your opinions about this one, for the first time I think I really like it!

I made an English Book Cover, for you to exemine better, without any foreign language distraction.

What do you say? How is it?

[kennyc]

Is the book written in Turkish? The cover is okay, but the title is totally pushing me away...

[Devor]

The art looks nice, but I agree that the title is just a little too weird for English speakers. Also, I think it's weird to have your protagonist's name on the cover, unless it's clearly part of the title, like "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows."

[Cinder]

I agree with everything said before. Also, remember not to worry too much about a cover, because if the publishers like it, they'll make it themselves anyway.

[Aidan of the tavern]

If the protagonist's name is going to be the name of the series as well or something then that's fine, otherwise I agree with Devor that its a bit strange to have the name on the cover. The cover itself is good in my opinion, but I wonder if you need that sunburst of light behind the title, because it seems a bit unecersarry and I think the gauntlet image would be fine on its own.

[kennyc]

Or if it's a series something like "A Darion Elderia adventure/story/book/etc"

[Helleaven]

Wow thanks for the comments everybody They're all good points and I am glad that I posted this thread. I will try to give you some anwers for the questions.

1-) Don't worry about the name itself, it is Turkish and the book is written in Turkish too. I will try to get published in my country, and except Orhan Pamuk (who had won a nobel prize) our books are translated to English or other languages very rarely. It would be something only the greatest writers can achieve, I wish my English was good enough to translate it to English by myself but anyway this will do for now

2-) The protagonist's name is on the cover, but I wasn't sure about it, too. This is going to be a series, consisting of four or five volumes. I wanted every book to has a common signature which shows that they're part of the same series. I think I have to find a better way to show that common feature, or may be I just write something like "The XXXX Series"

Thanks for pointing that out


3-) My brother has irritated by that light effect behind the title, too. I think I'm gonna erase that too. Actually it wasn't ment to be on the cover at first, but then the cover seemed a bit empty, something must have filled that feeling of emptiness. I just wish that I didn't erase the raw files, in order to delete only the light effect.

[Aidan of the tavern]

Wow thanks for the comments everybody They're all good points and I am glad that I posted this thread. I will try to give you some anwers for the questions.

1-) Don't worry about the name itself, it is Turkish and the book is written in Turkish too. I will try to get published in my country, and except Orhan Pamuk (who had won a nobel prize) our books are translated to English or other languages very rarely. It would be something only the greatest writers can achieve, I wish my English was good enough to translate it to English by myself but anyway this will do for now

2-) The protagonist's name is on the cover, but I wasn't sure about it, too. This is going to be a series, consisting of four or five volumes. I wanted every book to has a common signature which shows that they're part of the same series. I think I have to find a better way to show that common feature, or may be I just write something like "The XXXX Series"

Thanks for pointing that out


3-) My brother has irritated by that light effect behind the title, too. I think I'm gonna erase that too. Actually it wasn't ment to be on the cover at first, but then the cover seemed a bit empty, something must have filled that feeling of emptiness. I just wish that I didn't erase the raw files, in order to delete only the light effect.

Yes, I thought you might have added the extra light effect to fill the page a bit, to be honest I think it would look fine with just the gauntlet image, but if you feel you need to add something more you could change the font or something.

[Helleaven]

And yes! Finally I have finished fixing it. Please tell me your opinions about this one, for the first time I think I really like it!

I made an English Book Cover, for you to exemine better, without any foreign language distraction.

What do you say? How is it?

(I'll add it to my first post too so that people may see)

http://mythicscribes.com/gallery/mem...-the-gods.html

[Benjamin Clayborne]

Well, it appears to be a broken image, so I'm not really sure.