I watched the movie before reading the book, it kept me on the edge of my seat, I cried a lot and that's why I decided to start reading the series.
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I'd say, find out why it is 'boring' as it is. Sometimes you can add some conflict by just adding a few words. It is not in the number of words, but...
Ok, formating dialog has some easy rules: Everything one person says is in one paragraph, togheter with their body language and other actions. A new...