I don't want every character to have the same dialogue or same reaction to events, I want every character to stand out from each other. I also would...
I was thinking of using an approach like Feo suggested. Maybe Lira (MC) thanks Garek for something and says, you've always been like a father to me....
I've noticed in different novels that when there is a jump forward in time, the author creates a new paragraph but as if they hit the enter key three...