This is Chapter Eleven from my fantasy novel. The working title is Daern, at the moment. It is a first draft and unedited, but I wanted to get some feedback if anyone would be so kind. FYI Mordray is the bad guy searching for the good guys. Hope you like it. John CHAPTER ELEVEN Mordray's Pursuit Light from the rising sun gleamed off of the river, and the sparkles of its reflection hurt Mordray's eyes. ...