Tom
Istar
Today I found myself describing a character's eyes as "fractured." I don't know if this is clear at all as a description, or if a reader--who doesn't know what I was thinking when using that word--would know what to picture.
I've always thought of "fractured" eyes as those with a pale iris and dark iris ring, giving them a kind of shattered, stormy look.
Do you think the word "fractured" gets this across?
I've always thought of "fractured" eyes as those with a pale iris and dark iris ring, giving them a kind of shattered, stormy look.
Do you think the word "fractured" gets this across?