Hi, I'm a 12 year-old boy who loves writing-especially fantasy. I had created this plot but before I begin writing-what do you think of it? Feedback?:
Eamon is in possession of two of the most powerful objects in the universe- the Apherious Bow and the Polygamy Knife. They are capable of cutting any substance in the universe. Queen Zephyra has been following him for almost a year now in an attempt to retrieve the two objects. In the meantime, she is using the Polygamy Knife's twin to cut portals into other worlds. Eamon runs into Airlia, a girl his age from another world. They set off on a journey to destroy the objects. Eamon wishes to do so because he is aware that the Queen wants them to unite all the worlds in hope that the universe can exist in harmony. Eamon is well aware that if this happens, many of the worlds will dispute and fight. Million-billions-trillions of lives will be lost. Not only must he deal with the Queen's many allies, he must also deal with the numerous beings being transported to other worlds through the Queen's portals she created.