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Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing

J Q Kaiser
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(Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...
J Q Kaiser
6 min read
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1K
Book Chapters
(Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...

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