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  2. Chapter One

    The author's hands quivered over his new typewriter, purchased on ebay from an antique collector who was latter in life and was ready to sell his...
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  3. Prologue

    Right, here's a modified version of the prologue! Also, quick note - the last sentence feels a little choppy to me. Suggestions as to how to make...
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  4. Chapter 1 (Part 1)

    Chapter I Fifteen year old River walked next to her brother Caleb on the sidewalk, her bright blue earbuds a sharp contrast with her dark...
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  5. Chapter 1 (Part 2)

    “Then stay there! I think that’s yarrow. I’ll only take a second.” Caleb wavered for a moment, then chased after his sister. When he...
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  6. Chapter 2 (Part 1)

    River awoke to the sounds of singing birds and rustling leaves. She blinked, staring stupidly at the wood ceiling above her, her mind a complete...
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  7. Chapter 2 (Part 2)

    Suddenly, a thought pounded through River’s mind – her phone. Her phone might be working again. She had to call her mom and tell her to call the...
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  8. Chapter 2 (Part 3)

    Amara glanced up at the sun. “Hurry. We are late. It is not good form to be late when meeting your king.” She sped up to a slow, graceful lope...
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  9. Chapter 3 (Part 1)

    As River stepped through the door – which had mysteriously swung open, even though she could see no doorman – she felt beyond overwhelmed. The...
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  10. Chapter 1: Flash Flared

    I was awakened by a terrible trembling that immediately shook from my bed, I gasped only to discover air like lava going in and fire coming out. I...
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  11. Chapter 2: Eroh Vlani

    this is currently unfished but leave any comments to improve it thank you
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  12. Chapter 3: The Presence

    The tears that streamed his face stopped me in my tracks. I let go of his throat and he fell to the floor in a heap. I felt the presence leave me...
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  13. Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 1)

    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is...
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  14. Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 2)

    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is...
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  15. Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 Taryn On a cool autumn night in her nineteenth year, Taryn found herself in a black and seething mood. She walked through the door of...
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