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  1. Chapter 33.2 - Against the Glass

    By Lynea · Nov 7, 2020 · Tales from Lorianthil
    Lothira took him to the Tribunal building just as the dawn broke the night, casting a silver glow upon the stone. Damien gave a nod as she...
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  2. Writing fantasy: Choosing a plot, Lesson 1

    By Toby Johnson · Feb 2, 2021 · Fantasy Writing
    One of the most difficult things a person can do when creating a new novel is creating a plot. But there are ways around this. In the last...
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  3. Chapter One

    By after.eternity · Dec 22, 2017 · Book
    The author's hands quivered over his new typewriter, purchased on ebay from an antique collector who was latter in life and was ready to sell his...
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  4. Prologue

    By Feith · Jan 26, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    Right, here's a modified version of the prologue! Also, quick note - the last sentence feels a little choppy to me. Suggestions as to how to make...
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  5. Chapter 1 (Part 1)

    By Feith · Jan 26, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    Chapter I Fifteen year old River walked next to her brother Caleb on the sidewalk, her bright blue earbuds a sharp contrast with her dark...
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  6. Chapter 1 (Part 2)

    By Feith · Jan 26, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    “Then stay there! I think that’s yarrow. I’ll only take a second.” Caleb wavered for a moment, then chased after his sister. When he...
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  7. Chapter 2 (Part 1)

    By Feith · Jan 29, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    River awoke to the sounds of singing birds and rustling leaves. She blinked, staring stupidly at the wood ceiling above her, her mind a complete...
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  8. Chapter 2 (Part 2)

    By Feith · Jan 29, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    Suddenly, a thought pounded through River’s mind – her phone. Her phone might be working again. She had to call her mom and tell her to call the...
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  9. Chapter 2 (Part 3)

    By Feith · Feb 2, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    Amara glanced up at the sun. “Hurry. We are late. It is not good form to be late when meeting your king.” She sped up to a slow, graceful lope...
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  10. Chapter 3 (Part 1)

    By Feith · Feb 2, 2018 · The Forbidden Forest
    As River stepped through the door – which had mysteriously swung open, even though she could see no doorman – she felt beyond overwhelmed. The...
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  11. Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 1)

    By J Q Kaiser · May 28, 2018 · Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing
    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is...
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  12. Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 2)

    By J Q Kaiser · May 28, 2018 · Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing
    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is...
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  13. Chapter 1

    By QuietKnight · Jul 16, 2018 · Divided
    Chapter 1 Taryn On a cool autumn night in her nineteenth year, Taryn found herself in a black and seething mood. She walked through the door of...
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  14. Chapter 2

    By QuietKnight · Jul 16, 2018 · Divided
    Chapter 2 Brogan Brogan walked into the forge early the next morning, met by the peals of a hammer already beating against an anvil....
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