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Moon napped Ch1 rough draft pt 1

Chapter one

I parked my station wagon by Lizzies tattoo parlor. She made strange noise like barking “good girl Belle “as I patted the steering wheel, yeah my station wagon possessed by the spirit of my deceased German Shepard I had. She just found me when I was in serious troublesome time ago don’t know how but she did. I stared absently at the bright neon sign Lizzie’s charmed ink.

My body ached and the headache i had, I parallel parked in front Wu’s herbal remedies the best I could. Never try to mediate two feuding pixie families. I am lucky I survived though it didn’t feel like it. Boy my skin feels like it has been burned all the way through. Can’t go to the hospital as with fae and otherworldly creature magic might affect or do unknown damage the hospital can’t handle. The only reason that I survived this ordeal is the fact that I am one of the few phenomenon known as the magic borned. That both the fae community and the few human individuals and authorities that in the know are confused by us is an understatement. That the reason why I was orphaned, not going to think about that. Cant, that night…

Somehow I managed to pull myself out of Bell .As I did dizziness got hold of me .I needed a real solution to the constant pain and abuse. Being the only one of two detectives in the phenom dept. is pain in the but and sometimes that becomes literally a fact. The world went dark for a moment I came to leaning on the counter of in wu’s as I came to I heard rush of footsteps and hushed Japanese. I looked down embarrassingly to the drool on the counter. As soon as I was feeling not much as better but less nausea all around. Wu looked like she was in mid-thirties and had a pretty face. She is an Oni; I think that are a Japanese fae though I don’t know enough on the Japanese culture to be sure. All I know for certain is that she is an Oni, which she confessed to me first visit that happened by accident.

The world still seemed to swim slightly around me (fuck this going bite me in the ass) I tried to stand up which by some miracle I managed to do despite how I felt. Madam Wu took one look at me and clapped her hands. Immediately the group of girls that clattered around her behind the counter scattered as if she issued a verbal plan. It took two girls to escort me to a therapy room. Yeah she can treat magic afflictions that the hospitals can’t handle. The two girls helped me undress. I lay on the masseuse table with towels wrapped around me. I ran my hands through blond and brunet alternating streaked hair. Yeah It natural what can I say I am a freak as I stated before. Madam Wu came in as I looked up I looked at her shrewd face which was delicately painted. I couldn’t read any emotion on her face. She was followed by several of her girls. I felt slight tingly sensation down my spine. They were Oni as well
Obedience and submissive rocked they entered after Madam Wu. Being nauseous is not pleasant but when I get that fae sensing feeling it makes me feel even worse being a cocktail disorientation amongst other bad stuff. I must have blanked out because I opened my eyes not remembering that I closed them. I felt a bit of relief which must be from acupuncture cause the girls pulled the last of needles out the girls wiped my marked back with damp sponge to cool my back.
All of sudden the nausea that subsided due my used to those around returned with a vengeance. I even threw up. On top of that mark on my back, which looked like a blade began in itch and burn I’ve got cold sweats, damn this can’t be what it means. My senses arrested me
The twins walked in, oh no it is who I think is. Their human guise glamour looked ratty with the pointed noses. Both dressed in suites that would make don Corleone proud. Their real names are unpronounceable so I call them Saul and Paul. They both moved to either side of the doorway. In comes the thuggish and brutish as ever Gorn. Yep hobgoblins have weird names. He also is in human guise but still has an ugly mug. He grunts and moves forward and to the side. In walks in the cutest I ever seen., baby faced , smooth skin. Yet as I look into those adorable eyes I can see a hint that he older than old. V Oh my I hope I didn’t just pee , cant tell with this emotional cocktail sufficing . he wore a hoodie , fading jeans and trainers basically street cred clothes . this boy loves information, I am not surprised he made the connections and gained the respect. Omg, am I drooling please no . Yep V my main source of information regarding the fae. No no no this cant be happening him seeing me like this
‘”madam wu called me because she couldn’t heal what you have “ V said in that ever so cute voice purr, I mentally slapped myself into sense .” have to be careful not get caught in the crossfire in pixie family fued.” ‘what you have the end result of simply being victim of being in wrong place and wrong time, pixie burn which ironically not so simple condition’ he looked at me with those beautiful eyes whats wrong with me damn it every time never fails.

Gorn had a huge rectangular wooden box with old runes or script on the lid. It almost looked like a chest. V opened it and pulled out what looked like an old perfume bottle non spray of course. He approached where I lay and dabbed a tiny bit of liquid right between my upper lip and nostrils. Man I think he knocked me out with whatever was in that bottle

What you doing? Destiny? My mother asked me in a bemused tone smiling at me. The samurai sword that my tiny hands of my 6 years old body should not have been able to carry I lifted with quite ease
Destiny !!? she screamed as I hacked at her as she became a a red fountain . I watched the mess of her body with a satisfied smile on my face .

What the? My father entered the kitchen?!!!
I pounced and sliced his head right of as if it was butter. I just stared at my parents without any remorse.
No!!! destiny I screamed at my younger self
my six old face stared vacantly off into space a ghost of a smile that would send any sane person running for dear life. Crept in

where was i? oh yes madam wu’s , V’s apparent smooth skin skin of a youth brushed me by me by few mili metres just missing touching me. Woah ,when did the temperature rise here.
Wiping his hands with wet wipes he moved further away from me. The room seemed to cool down right just after that.

Suddenly the image of my dead parents came back despite knowing the truth ,bile came rushing through my mouth as I sprinted to the bathroom and vomited. I came back to see v leaning against the wall looking at me with his eyes appraising me with some hidden knowledge . Had a nightmare? Raising his right eyebrow

Yes, I looked uncomfortably at him I hate that he had seen me like this, I need to keep things professional. I rushed back to table where I lay before. Grabbed the towel covered myself up “get out” my cheeks reddened at the thought of him seeing me like this. V smiled that gave me a perfunctory vibe (agh now he got me thinking big words ) I sat down where I laid before because the cocktail I made of my own emotions started to have similar effect as if I was hung over. The heat of embarrassment slowly died away.
I got to thank V .
As the mess of emotions eventually slipped away I gave a deep sigh as my shoulders relaxed.
Boy I feel good

Madam Wu massaged the stiff areas left in my body as the mark on my back started to itch but I managed to fight it back and calm the incomplete curse that I stuck with it is more of help than hindrance though it can be annoying at times.
The Oni while not weak themselves as I understand from folklore and rumours can be very scary and very powerful, because of this it makes suspicious that V is more than what seems and very powerful. I don’t know much about V funnily enough. He has been always useful with information for when he wants to be which is most of times. Yeah I respect V and despite the fact I only know what he lets know about him , I trust him. I can’t explain why but I do . Yeah ,saying that I have an interesting history with V is an understatement.
My back had not stopped itching. True that I managed to control as best as I can to the point that like someing faint in background but it there non the less. This can’t ever be helped when the fae is around .

Madam wu give some herbal hot drink from her culture. As I sip it I scrunch up my face as it quite bitter taste to start off then followed by a sweet taste. My head seemed to clear. My aching ,itching body is a sign that whatever v did is working as my body is healing itself.

As I approach belle from madam wu’s she jumped up and while honking widely heat of of embarrassment engulfed me immediately.

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