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  1. Lynea
    Alright, alright. I'll start with the positive: 1. The scene has a strong, urgent sense of conflict. A good sense of conflict keeps your audience engaged. 2. There are some clear descriptions here, such as "it was covered in millions of writhing...
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  2. Lynea
    Wow. When/where can I get a copy of this?
  3. Asael Verity
    Please write a review if possible, I would really appreciate it!
  4. CelestialGrace
    I read this last night and I'm still processing the ending :)