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  1. pmmg
    Well...The parentheticals could just be the voice the story is written in, so they are not really wrong. Its just if they are a crutch method that it would be an issue. For myself, when I get reviewed, no one ever likes my use of comma's, so I am...
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  2. pmmg
    I found the writing here to be very competent and well punctuated, which I dont often say. I am not sure how many more parentheticals I would have to see before I might start thinking there are too many of them. I looked several of these places...