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Well, you certainly fleshed out those three wars. Good job! The history looks nice and detailed so the world should craft itself now. Good luck!

Well, the city Redwall shares its name with the Redwall Abbey in the Redwall series by Brian Jacques. They both have walls of some red material. You might want to reconsider that city. Pentos sounds really good and I don't see any major similarities. Avalar's name seems similar to Avalon, the...

I, also, am curious why the horns are unattractive. Is the practice of removing the horns new in order to fit in with the other races? If not, why hasn't sexual selection gotten rid of the horns?

Well, can you explain why Lilith wants to destroy Earth? Also, how would she influence the humans if she can't actually be there? Those are the questions that popped out to me but I like the way the lesser demons look when their possessing someone.

I was able to follow it pretty well. The only really confusing part was when you explained the wars that happen Aeterna, probably because the families were never explained and you really only explained three wars in half a paragraph. But, other then that, it was all pretty clear and a concise...

Hello! I'm new here and I thought I would introduce myself. My name is Ciloth (obviously not my real name) and I'm glad to be part of your community now. I truly love worldbuilding and spend days just thinking on aspect of my worlds. My favorite part of worldbuilding is strangely the...