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I do not know if this is the correct place to ask this question so my apologies if its not. I had a very quick question. I have heard from multiple people that when making a character you should be careful not make the character mirror yourself, is this true and why? how could it negatively...

Thanks Tom! wow I really did not expect to get any positive feedback for this system and thank you for asking all of your questions! Those are things i would not have even taken into consideration. I really like that you asked about how the use of magic wears away the soul, the moment I read the...

Sorry that I typed so much. So i'm still new to fantasy and world building and i'm trying to make a magic system. I have a bit of an idea in mind that I really like and it fits into my world but id still like to run it past you guys and get some feedback. Please read everything. In my world...

Thanks for your suggestion, its really helpful and its more than just $0.02 haha

Oh now I see what you'er saying sorry for misunderstanding thanks for making things clear

I like this suggestion but my Gothics aren't really bad guys, my protagonist worships Gothic deity, they lean more towards growth through struggle and doing whatever you have to do to get ahead or survive, things like that

Both, for example with Elder Scrolls Akatosh is the god of time but he represents the qualities of endurance, invincibility, and everlasting legitimacy

There are not only two gods. In the post I said six Haven deity and seven Gothic deity which makes 13 and they aren't really pitted against each other, they just have their own motives that sometimes clash with the motives of the other deity.

So I need some help creating a well rounded pantheon...I think, Let me start out by saying that there are two main religious groups in my world both with their own pantheons. The two main groups are the Haven worshipers which lean more towards light and purity and the Gothic worshipers which...

Thanks everyone for all the suggestions but I did forget to mention that the people who created this dam are some what advanced for their time period, I don't know if that bit of info will help or contribute to the reason the dam was built.

In my world I have a reservoir that is backed up by a fortress /dam. The fortress was originally there to block a very important mountain pass that was once used by invaders, it was later converted into a dam but is still used as a fort. The purpose of the dam is the issue. I put a dam there...

Thank you everyone for your feedback and suggestions I really appreciate it with all of the points and suggestions given here I feel like I now have enough to start my research thanks again!

Thanks so much for your help

Thanks so much for getting back so quickly and I will certainly look further into these points you have presented and I agree fully with what you said at the end, but in the question I asked only for credible writing sources I did not ask anyone to do my research for me.