"Some men were carved from stone, some shaped from clay and other were scraped from the boot of God and made to serve as slaves." A saying from my story about the races of men.
I like the Reign of Fire movie where Dragons actually ate Ash for food. They had two glands that sprayed and when mixed created a flame thrower effect and then they ate Ash to survive.
My question is, if she goes into this hidey hole can she decide the location in which she comes out or will she always come out in the same physical place she entered. If she can teleport herself via the hidey hole then she could basically become a God and no one could kill her. In a tight spot...
Hmm I never thought of it that way I might have the backwards after all. As for the Splitting of the Mind thing yes, sometimes things go wrong. Some people crack and go insane. It was said the first user named Haakon could split his mind six-thousand ways. He was called The Sage of the...
In my story i'm going with two different types of magic. Well maybe more. Thoughts?
First Aether magic . I would attribute this to be force like. Aether is the hidden element that binds all tangible things together. It's based off of weight vs weight ratios. If I weigh 180 pounds and this...
In an interview someone ask Pat if Kvothe could be trusted as a nararator of his story and pat just smiled. I think alot of what Kvothe tells us is what he thinks happened and we all know hes a liar who starts rumors about himself.
My MC is telepathic at the end of his journey. At the start of the story he is a child who doesn't learn to use Alter or Aether proficiently until much later.
Thanks guys. You all make some very good points. I think I might add in some different languages/dialects and such just to add some depth into the universe also I might add in interaction with a teacher or something so he can grasp different languages easier.
The First one Lies of Locke Lamora was beyond fantastic the Second fell short of the first I can only imagine the third falling shorter however that being said falling short of the first is very easy to do when the first was beyond amazing that still makes the second one amazing.
Is anyone else as in love with these books as me. This man has woven such a compelling story and every other chapter has a hidden easter egg which is just great. I mean I cannot say enough about the story. If you have looked into these books please do. I am expecting the Third one to be...
In my story the main character is a world walker. It is a special type of person now but once it was as easy as breathing. Since the universe was populated by humans who could world walk and they all came from one central planet do you think over time their languages would develop differently...
When I Read the title I thought your people could photosynthesize? Like plants. I was like YES! I can just see people standing outside with their arms open absorbing the sun and stuff and then using that mass of energy to do magic or something hah! my brain is wacky.