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    Penpilot replied to the thread Help with Physical Power Difference in Gender in a Fantasy Race.

    You still didn't answer why? This is where IMHO, the biggest problem lies for me. Here you're basically saying most women are some how...

    Jul 9, 2020 at 6:42 PM
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    Penpilot replied to the thread Help with Physical Power Difference in Gender in a Fantasy Race.

    Why? Why is it rarer in women? Why are women in your world some how less durable mentally? If they're made, why aren't these traits...

    Jul 8, 2020 at 4:59 PM
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    Penpilot replied to the thread How Much Should a Book in a Series Resolve?.

    I hate anything that cuts off like that, whether it's books, TV shows, or movies. IMHO, there should be a satisfying ending/pause point....

    Jul 8, 2020 at 4:44 PM
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    Penpilot replied to the thread Can two moons rotate around a world in opposite directions of each other.

    Here are some links. Jupiter has moon groups that rotate in opposite directions. The moons that move in prograde orbit are thought to be...

    Jul 7, 2020 at 9:32 PM
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    Penpilot replied to the thread Describing expressions in written form?.

    If there was one word to sum up what the kid was feeling/expressing, I'd say "displeased." You can tell me to take a flying leap if I'm...

    Jul 7, 2020 at 6:54 AM