Ireth
Myth Weaver
I have a bit of a problem in the current scene of my latest WIP. The POV character has taken a man captive to torture him out of misguided revenge, and the man's family and friends soon show up to save him. The POV character knows the name of his captive, but not those of the family or friends, which makes things problematic when all eight would-be rescuers show up at the same time. Given the nature of the scene, there's no time to waste on formal introductions of each and every rescuer to the POV character, as the reader already knows most of their names, and the rest are guessable by context.
So, given that, how should I handle this scene without unnecessarily switching POV to someone who would know all the names, and without cluttering the page with potentially confusing descriptors like "the blonde woman archer", "the taller of the two blond men", "the dark-haired not-Fae* with grey eyes", etc.?
*this is a necessary evil, because the POV character doesn't know what those he calls "not-Fae" actually are (light-elves from Alfheim). They look a bit like Fae, but there are fundamental differences in physiology that sets them apart from both Fae and humans.
So, given that, how should I handle this scene without unnecessarily switching POV to someone who would know all the names, and without cluttering the page with potentially confusing descriptors like "the blonde woman archer", "the taller of the two blond men", "the dark-haired not-Fae* with grey eyes", etc.?
*this is a necessary evil, because the POV character doesn't know what those he calls "not-Fae" actually are (light-elves from Alfheim). They look a bit like Fae, but there are fundamental differences in physiology that sets them apart from both Fae and humans.