Hi

[Empathy]

Hello from the cold place know as England.
I am only young but I enjoy reading and writing in my spare time.
I'm currently in the middle of writing a story and would like sopme feedback to find out if theres anything I can do to improve my writing.
Hope to be hearing from you soon.
Empathy x

 

[Sparkie]

Cool. Hope to see your story in the Showcase sometime. Till then, good luck with your writing.

 

[Shadoe]

Hi! Welcome! Post away - it's a great place for feedback!

 

[Empathy]

Thank you for the replies, I will try and get my story up as soon as possible.

 

[Xanados]

Hello from the cold place know as England.
I am only young but I enjoy reading and writing in my spare time.
I'm currently in the middle of writing a story and would like sopme feedback to find out if theres anything I can do to improve my writing.
Hope to be hearing from you soon.
Empathy x

Hello, Empathy, from the cold place known as Scotland! May I ask what age you are?
I hope you enjoy your stay, lad.

 

[Empathy]

I'm 20 so not that old to be writing, but I hope you like some of my stuff. Would also like to say I'm a lass, LOL. But no worries I sometimes even in real life get mistaken for a guy

 

[Hëradïn]

welcome from the gold state! enjoy your stay and remember to have fun!

 

[The Blue Lotus]

A belated welcome to you dear.

So sorry I'm late with this... Looking forward to getting to know you!

 

[Empathy]

No worries Blue Lotus. We all have lives that keep us busy.
As I said I currently have one of my stories up in the Showcase, called Welcome to Darkside.
Any comments would be great!