Dragonbane
Acolyte
Any advice on developing a good magic system?
These statements contradicts themselves. Innate means you are born with it, like you say some magic-users are, and you say magic is purely innate. How then do others discover it on their own?Some are born natural magic users, others discover it on their own. In my workld magic is purely innate.
I think it is that very unexpected versatility of humans that makes magic so problematical.We're a versatile and resourceful people.
Always!!!Just something to consider.
I would encourage you to consider a threshold question. The question is whether you want the magic to fix the problem or if you want humans to fix the problem. If you want the former then the magic system needs to be more detailed and explained to the reader. If you want the latter then you need not explain the magic system in detail. This is Sandersons First Law of Magic. The two modern authors that exemplify these ends are Sanderson and Martin.
I would encourage you to consider a threshold question. The question is whether you want the magic to fix the problem or if you want humans to fix the problem. If you want the former then the magic system needs to be more detailed and explained to the reader. If you want the latter then you need not explain the magic system in detail. This is Sandersons First Law of Magic. The two modern authors that exemplify these ends are Sanderson and Martin.
I meant that some people are born knowing how to use their power while others have the power, they must learn how to use it.These statements contradicts themselves. Innate means you are born with it, like you say some magic-users are, and you say magic is purely innate. How then do others discover it on their own?
Yes I have races(over 60 of them!) Everyone has the potential to use any magic but certain races are better equipped to do one magic then another(for example I have a race called Saxum which look like boulders and are better suited for earth magic rather then water magic)Just a question. Are magic used by all genders and races? (assuming you have races, you didn't say). Are people equally strong in all sub-divisions of magic? I would humbly suggest another word for your different types of magic than sub-division, because to me the word sounds like a very scientific term, although if magic is spoken of in this way in your world, I guess I could get used to it.
Why?I would personally move Create Illusion to the sub-division Binding/Fusion. They seem to belong there to me.
Usually only desperate or evil people feed on surrounding energy. You can feed on other humans if your will is stronger then theirs(and its up to them if they can justify it). You can use up all of it but you probably won’t survive it.How do people who use magic feel about it when they feed on the energy around them? Is it right to do so? Does not a forest need its own life force? Can you feed on other humans, and what happens to them, and is that okay to do to another human?
If needed, how much of your own life force can you use up in your magic? Can you fall into a coma, get physically ill or lose 50 pounds overnight because you overdid things (for example to save your own life)?
I like your ideas on magic, but about magic rules, what happens if you try to break them, bend them or misuse them? Teenagers always have to test their limits and make their own experiences (say a parent told them "don't drink ok?" Would any teenager actually take that advice? And if they did, would that even be smart, because if they didn't they would not have their own experience about it, and would have no idea how much alcohol they could drink before they've had enough...). Using magic all the time, can it be dangerous? Are all those who use magic super athletes to use their physical body in magic work?
Each division has it's own branching tree, and those who have the gift can only work within a system they are born to.
Like I said in the magic system, magic is sentient and it will fight for control. And just like playing with fire or something dangerous, there are consequences if you mess up
I love the idea of magic being a living thing. It makes a great excuse to give yourself wiggle room if the needs of the story require you to bend the rules of magic a bit.