Rkcapps
Sage
This sentence is bugging me but I can't think how to change it. Any recommendations?
FYI, my MC is in a tree and there's snow on the ground.
"Fingers devoid of sensation gripped the tree but she didn’t feel them. "
FYI, my MC is in a tree and there's snow on the ground.
"Fingers devoid of sensation gripped the tree but she didn’t feel them. "