A reader pointed out to me that I am mixing up verb tenses in my sentences. I didn't even realize I was doing it.
Can you help me figure out the right way to write this?
Option A
Yhora closed her eyes, her purple scars glowing.
Option B
Yhora closed her eyes. Her purple started to glow.
I personally prefer option A because it flows better but I think I may be mixing up present and past tense. Right?
Can you help me figure out the right way to write this?
Option A
Yhora closed her eyes, her purple scars glowing.
Option B
Yhora closed her eyes. Her purple started to glow.
I personally prefer option A because it flows better but I think I may be mixing up present and past tense. Right?