I am looking for opinions and constructive criticism on a Fantasy City that I have developed.
It is a city of Wayfarers (treasure hunters, pathfinders and explorers) who hire out their services to the other CityStates. They are ruled by a Chieftain, who oversees the Ruling Council, made up of senior Wayfarers and Chief's of Industry. Wayfarers are organised into Cadres, small bands operating out of their own Headquarters. Anyone may form a Cadre, although it is usually a powerful and wealthy individual who has the resources.
Their technology is Earth Plus, more sophisticated with powerful aircraft and energy weapons, as well as advanced power generation.
They maintain a neutral relationship with the other CityStates, mainly because they are too useful to destroy or oppose.
Tell me what you think and any suggestions for improvements.
It is a city of Wayfarers (treasure hunters, pathfinders and explorers) who hire out their services to the other CityStates. They are ruled by a Chieftain, who oversees the Ruling Council, made up of senior Wayfarers and Chief's of Industry. Wayfarers are organised into Cadres, small bands operating out of their own Headquarters. Anyone may form a Cadre, although it is usually a powerful and wealthy individual who has the resources.
Their technology is Earth Plus, more sophisticated with powerful aircraft and energy weapons, as well as advanced power generation.
They maintain a neutral relationship with the other CityStates, mainly because they are too useful to destroy or oppose.
Tell me what you think and any suggestions for improvements.