I just finished reading Joe Abercrombie's "Best Served Cold".
While reading, I noticed the prose style for one of the characters is significantly different from other POVs. The character Morveer (a professional poisoner) has a very condescending, smug attitude. He falsely thinks he's smarter than everyone, belittles people, and treats others with contempt.
In all of his POV scenes, the prose is written with longer phrasings, more complex words, and unusual comparisons. It helps to create a tone that drips with self-indulgent superiority. Now, I think we all do this on some level when writing from a particular POV. However, the level of detail Abercrombie excersised in choosing words and phrasings that Morveer would use (and not the author), in addition to his actions & dialogue, really helped to pull the character together. I'm specifically referencing the narration...not dialogue.
Has anyone written characters, purposefully branching away from their normal writing style to further expand on character?
If you've read the book (or similar scenario), I'd like comments on its effectiveness for you as a reader as well.
While reading, I noticed the prose style for one of the characters is significantly different from other POVs. The character Morveer (a professional poisoner) has a very condescending, smug attitude. He falsely thinks he's smarter than everyone, belittles people, and treats others with contempt.
In all of his POV scenes, the prose is written with longer phrasings, more complex words, and unusual comparisons. It helps to create a tone that drips with self-indulgent superiority. Now, I think we all do this on some level when writing from a particular POV. However, the level of detail Abercrombie excersised in choosing words and phrasings that Morveer would use (and not the author), in addition to his actions & dialogue, really helped to pull the character together. I'm specifically referencing the narration...not dialogue.
Has anyone written characters, purposefully branching away from their normal writing style to further expand on character?
If you've read the book (or similar scenario), I'd like comments on its effectiveness for you as a reader as well.
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