Secondary world dieselpunk. Magic exists in the landscape and technology is developed to take advantage of it. In the same way the the Wright...
Love the Constantinople history stuff. My two thoughts: Often in these sorts of fights three is a "royalist" faction. A group that just wants to...
I finally finished and self-published my first novella. Queen of the Cloud Pirates is the first novella in the Crossing the Dropline series....
As many have mentioned, eight seems like a lot. I would also add if you do have a cast that size especially in rapid succession to keep the names...
I agree with Devor that the story needs to be about your character. Either of your options can be really interesting depending on how you set up...
Interesting discussion.. someone mentioned the WW2 bomber setup with 10 man crews of bombers. If you captain and pilot are the one in the...
Why do you need to know the age? Not to dissuade you, but sometimes the answer to the "why" can help lead you to the answer for "what" (in this...
My first read on this is that the title is too small and feels almost like an afterthought. I also have a hard time understanding the imagery. And...
It would make teaching, learning and practice nearly impossible. How would you learn spellcasting if you could not practice doing it?
I definitely have ideas of what characters are like, but exact features don't seem to stick in my head when I read. Sometimes if I really like a...
Thanks again for the feedback and ideas. I have tried to let it settle a little more in my head before putting up another round. [IMG] Based on...
Reading the OP, Cartographer's Guild is what popped into my head. Not sure if there are tutorials there, but as I remember it is a pretty deep and...
Interesting idea. I am working on the cover for my first ebook and I have had some similar thoughts. The paper world and the electronic world are...
Picked up the sample chapter from the DE site. Curious if that means anything to their rankings. I'll let you know when I get to reading the full...
TheMirrorMage - WOW. That is amazing that you did those so fast. I definitely like fonts and how the lines in places make things look. I will be...
I agree that it makes better sense to have the fonts and colors match through the third book. I like the yellow lined green of Runemaster better...
No reason to worry about sounding like a Nag at all. I love hearing feedback. As I wrote to The MirrorMage, I really like the composition of the...
Sure TheMirrorMage, post em here. I really like how the composition works in the second round, but I am open to playing with colors. Be very...
Thanks all
