Great thread, love the way the eyes stand out in the OP!
Pretty nice colors, moody. I would somehow make "Mark Stone" stand out a bit better...
I have not... and I live in Tokyo, so, ones held here will not quite be the same. I would imagine they would be mixed with all kind of anime and...
This might be the wrong place to ask that question! Why don't you Google it, find a forum for it or call like, and arts and crafts supply store,...
"Why are you so tough on me? Pata responded Should there be a period here? Or some other punctuation ?
Not every book can be balanced with perfect ethnic, gender, sexual choice, age or any other group that may be left out. IF the story is about a...
It's a cover for an illegal operation that takes place in the basement. So... the culture behind it is all a front and can have limited detail....
I think that just about clears up what I wanted to know. I think my speculation was close to the answers you guys gave. I figure I want no less...
Wow. That was an incredible response, Crow. Thanks a lot! So, it is safe for me to at least use "nave" just to describe position. I just wanna...
I think a simple way to gauge this is when you start losing track yourself.
So, I have started to write a novella. To be honest, I have never read one and only have a rough idea what one "should" be. I am under the...
Wow. Lots of good responses fast. Thanks... I guess I can change the word church but... I don't think church only means the building. Like there...
Thanks for posting this. I was unaware! RIP... Liked him. And wow, 93...
Okay, so I am describing a church - but it is in my world and therefore not a "Chrstian" church... When I look up layouts of a church, I find...
Dang its hard to get a critique partner... Answering this won't even bump it since it's been up almost a month and has hardly moved down the page....
Thanks for the responses... When doing the math, I like how 12 point turns out myself. Sounds good.
So, a question I see over and over (and we all do) is - what's a good chapter length? Most people answer the question in word count. But, to me,...
This sounds good too. thanks! And yes, a scene break is always used. I have a few chapters that I need to tell the events with split POVs so, I...
Thank you very much for all these replies. In this case, it seems pretty clear that it is acceptable. Looks like there is not much division in...
Basically, my question is not about how to write a chapter with multiple POVs, but if it bothers readers. I notice in a few of my chapters I...
