March 27 - 10 downloads March 28 - 4 downloads March 29 - 4 downloads March 30 - 56 downloads* *On the 30th 'Shardfall' appeared on...
I'm not about to post every review I get on the forums, but the previous one hurt so much that I want to give you this one, too. It is quite the...
I understand. My condolences, Mindfire.
I agree with Tom in this. Also, if anyone wants to discuss this further, please do it in another thread. 'Lioness' suffers enough controversy...
I realize that, and on this subject got some good advice from my beta readers. I changed some things and explained some things, but in the end...
Your story sounds OK to me, but I'm probably the last one to judge. I am a product of the '60s/'70s (at least intellectually, not practicing) and...
'My' Kell girls start their sexual life early as well. Maud at eighteen had had already two lovers and Wemawee at sixteen wasn't a novice either....
March 22 - 22 downloads March 23 - 27 downloads March 24 - 8 downloads March 25 - 8 downloads March 26 - 11 downloads I don't really know where...
@CM Yes, I took that in consideration. They do it by magic, and have all sorts of suppressor spells (I really didn't want Kell women with...
You're quite welcome, CM. Besides, our outlooks are not dissimilar. Over here we are taught to treat everybody the same. Well, that is what I...
@Nimue: Based on your question I rewrote the part where Maud explains their sex-swap to Jurgis. Is this more acceptable? Later in the book,...
Because they got too much 'urges'. I see it as a body that makes too much testosterone and needs medication to keep the levels down. The women...
That is encouraging! Dank je wel, Steer.
I'm not making snide remarks. Only to base a whole book evaluation upon a handful of excerpts meant to give a hint of the action and no more,...
Darkwriter - You have the book, so you know what you say here is not what the book says. Did you read it? First, there is no diplomatic...
Perhaps being more specific would help. I generally ask them to watch out for anything that doesn't sound right, but it could be that isn't clear...
But the last one came through alright, Devor. The density was on my part, not on yours.
I need to re-read the major part again to get the gist :) But the last part: Wouldn't the fact that the Chorwaynie/Jentakan are brown peoples...
An emotional exercise, up to now. It is clear I unintentionally pressed a lot of wrong buttons. Some because I didn’t think a point far enough...
I get a lot of comments on snippets. That's judging out of context. Maud's society (one out of several equally important and described ones) is...
