BeigePalladin
Sage
hi y'all, just three things I'm thinking about whilst properly defining the world of many of my tales (I have plots and short stories, but I want it down much more concrete before starting on something full length) and I'd like some feedback/ideas about if its not too much trouble
1) my world has four "realms" - worlds if you may - that are all interlinked, but three of them are unstable due to the collapse of the fifth in the past. the seecence of each is leaking into the others, threatening to destroy the origionator of the seecence etc. as well, this creates conflict between the three realms, as by activly taking the energy of the others is the most tested and safest way to ensure ones own realm's survival (there are other ways, but they're risky. I'm just wondering if this seems to contrived to be beliveable, or too abstract?
2) The realms mentioned above each bear aspects, but I'm having trouble deciding on one of the aspects of one of them. Anyone have any suggestions for an opposite of change other than stability that dosen't bear openly negative connotations. any ideas?
3) I'm considering usin an actual form of the consorvation of ninjutsu in the worlds magical system - with magic being using the eccence around you to create effects (its not consumed, just rendered temporarily inert). just wondering of thoughts on this?
thanks for reading/answering if you do
1) my world has four "realms" - worlds if you may - that are all interlinked, but three of them are unstable due to the collapse of the fifth in the past. the seecence of each is leaking into the others, threatening to destroy the origionator of the seecence etc. as well, this creates conflict between the three realms, as by activly taking the energy of the others is the most tested and safest way to ensure ones own realm's survival (there are other ways, but they're risky. I'm just wondering if this seems to contrived to be beliveable, or too abstract?
2) The realms mentioned above each bear aspects, but I'm having trouble deciding on one of the aspects of one of them. Anyone have any suggestions for an opposite of change other than stability that dosen't bear openly negative connotations. any ideas?
3) I'm considering usin an actual form of the consorvation of ninjutsu in the worlds magical system - with magic being using the eccence around you to create effects (its not consumed, just rendered temporarily inert). just wondering of thoughts on this?
thanks for reading/answering if you do