Vanya
Dreamer
I'm having trouble deciding if I'm bombarding the reader with too much information or not enough. I have quite a few different races, personalities of the race, and their culture and language. I'm introducing the characters throughout the book and explaining their race as they are introduced. I'm trying to keep the information simple and not go into too much detail unless it's pertinent to the plot. How can you tell if you're giving out too much information all at once? How can you tell if it's not enough details and confuse the reader?