Foah
Troubadour
I'm close to done with my worldbuilding and outlining parts in preparation for actually writing the story and the scenes, but I'm still left with one big question; one that I haven't been able to answer by myself yet:
Should I write the story as a 1st person perspective, or as a 3rd person perspective?
The story, which will be roughly the length of a long novella, completely centers around the main character and the main character alone. Everything you read will be something that the main character experiences too. This is a GREAT argument for having the story in 1st person.
However, I'm not comfortable with it. It's not the perspective in and of itself, but I feel that a 1st person perspective would make my subplots and twists a lot harder to veil. The main story arc is accompanied by 3 important subplots and 2 main plot changing twists - I want these concealed as best as possible, without being "out of the blue". Instead of your ordinary 2 or 3 hints of upcoming plot changes, I'll have 1 or 2 very subliminal, VERY subliminal hints that these subplots and main plot twists will happen. I'm afraid I can't hide these well enough if I write from a 1st person perspective, for example:
"MC closes the door on Mila, who's left standing in the cold rain" perfectly manages to hold hints and information that progresses 2 of the aforementioned subplots, while:
"I close the door on Mila, leaving her in the cold rain" simply doesn't cut it. If you'd know the ending and twists you would most certainly agree that the 3rd person perspective conveys hints, while the 1st person perspective just doesn't.
So, in conclusion. There are greater arguments for writing from a 1st person perspective. It's way harder to write from a 1st person perspective and keep all hints and details important to the subplots of the story. If I could write it equally well from either perspective, I'd choose 1st person. The problem is I'm not confident I'll get an equally good, or better, result based on my own capabilities at this time.
Any and all advice is most welcome
Should I write the story as a 1st person perspective, or as a 3rd person perspective?
The story, which will be roughly the length of a long novella, completely centers around the main character and the main character alone. Everything you read will be something that the main character experiences too. This is a GREAT argument for having the story in 1st person.
However, I'm not comfortable with it. It's not the perspective in and of itself, but I feel that a 1st person perspective would make my subplots and twists a lot harder to veil. The main story arc is accompanied by 3 important subplots and 2 main plot changing twists - I want these concealed as best as possible, without being "out of the blue". Instead of your ordinary 2 or 3 hints of upcoming plot changes, I'll have 1 or 2 very subliminal, VERY subliminal hints that these subplots and main plot twists will happen. I'm afraid I can't hide these well enough if I write from a 1st person perspective, for example:
"MC closes the door on Mila, who's left standing in the cold rain" perfectly manages to hold hints and information that progresses 2 of the aforementioned subplots, while:
"I close the door on Mila, leaving her in the cold rain" simply doesn't cut it. If you'd know the ending and twists you would most certainly agree that the 3rd person perspective conveys hints, while the 1st person perspective just doesn't.
So, in conclusion. There are greater arguments for writing from a 1st person perspective. It's way harder to write from a 1st person perspective and keep all hints and details important to the subplots of the story. If I could write it equally well from either perspective, I'd choose 1st person. The problem is I'm not confident I'll get an equally good, or better, result based on my own capabilities at this time.
Any and all advice is most welcome