Ahoy,
I'm sitting around thinking about punctuation, and colons specifically. As far as I understand it, I've used them correctly, but I'm wondering whether I should be using them at all. I'm worried they may make the text too formal or too clinical, which isn't really what I want.
What are your thoughts?
Examples:
I'm sitting around thinking about punctuation, and colons specifically. As far as I understand it, I've used them correctly, but I'm wondering whether I should be using them at all. I'm worried they may make the text too formal or too clinical, which isn't really what I want.
What are your thoughts?
Examples:
Halfway around the semi-circle the road split into two: one way continuing east out the other end of the village, and one cutting south between the buildings and on into the forest.
No one paid them any mind as they sauntered over to admire the old well. It looked like taken from the pages of a children's book: smooth rocks stacked to form a circular wall, a little wooden roof covering it all, and a winch to haul up the water bucket.