I am writing a novel named way of the cubist can anyone give opinion to me ??

[Chitra]

Power system

No, this not your cliche mana or manacores but my own power system

Power source - ION and NIGHTRIX like mana it all round the world even in the Galaxy contain this energy , people who can harness this energy are known as CUBIST.

little background - A mysterious speck of light was in the centre of this galaxy heart and after million and trillions years passes and due to " mysterious speck of light" ( suggest me somes names ) and due to which the ION and NIGHTRIX were all round the Galaxy .

RANKS

Human

• Infant
•  Awaken
• Shatter

After the trail of shackles of Mortal bonds ( their are trial to ascend to next realm. ie human is realm and infant , awaken and shatter is ranks , i explain later heheh )

King

•  Common
• Nobel
• Royal

After the trial of faith

Saint / Sinner

• Heaven gathering/ Hell gathering
• lighton/Daron
• Arch Saint /Arch Sinner

After the trail of holy grail

More but i tell later

 

[pmmg]

How about the singularity?

Since the speck of light probably came first, and people 'cubists' came after, it probably has no name, other than whatever they choose to call it. They probably would not even know it was a speck of light originally. How about just 'the source'.

I feel I should say as an obvious observation that if I look up cubist on the internet, I am going to get a lot of artwork.

 

[Chitra]

Sir , i can somes help with trail system l