Ireth
Myth Weaver
I've come across a slight issue with a few characters in Winter's Queen, and I could really use some advice on fixing it.
The scenario involves four primary characters: Ariel (the MC), Vincent (Ariel's dad), Dom (Ariel's uncle / Vincent's brother), and Loegaire (the antagonist of the scenario, but not the book itself). Some ~17 years before the start of the book, Loegaire set out to kidnap a child from the human word after being cursed to never father one of his own; he wound up targeting the then-infant Ariel, but was thwarted by Vincent and Dom. Now Ariel has been taken into Faerie by the book's main villain, and she has met Loegaire and befriended him. It having been a long time since their initial encounter, and Loegaire being Fae (and thus immortal), he looks just the same as he did ~17 years ago while Ariel has grown from a newborn to an almost-17 year old woman.
The problem arises when I try to figure out who should know whom by sight. Originally I had Vincent repressing all memory of the baby-snatching attempt, and Dom never thinking to remind him of it (because it's not exactly good table conversation), but I've since reconsidered. Thing is, if Vincent does remember, and has raised Ariel to beware of the Fae in general (which is still the case regardless of whether Vincent remembers the specific incident or not), he would no doubt warn her especially against That One Fae who tried to take her away from him all those years ago. Vincent does not know Loegaire by name, but might very well remember his appearance, and would have let Ariel know about that too. Dom would be likely to remember him also. Ariel, having aged significantly, would be unrecognizable to Loegaire when they met for the second time, and it takes a while for him to figure out who she is, while she remains ignorant until it is pointed out to her by her father and uncle. Loegaire himself doesn't let on what he knows at all, since he knows Ariel wouldn't react well.
If I have Ariel recognize Loegaire on sight, even if it takes a while to click, that would destroy the relationship between them (strictly friendly/platonic) that arises from mutual ignorance, and it makes the pending reveal at the climax of the story basically nil. But it doesn't make sense for her not to at least have some nagging familiarity when she meets him in the first 1/4 or so of the story. Ariel isn't stupid; she knows her family has had only one personal encounter with the Fae prior to the start of the book, and that event was Loegaire's kidnapping attempt. If she's personally familiar, even distantly, with ANY Fae, it would be him or the lackey who had tried to help him (whose name is also unknown to Ariel and her family). Any idea how I can believably keep Ariel in the dark until the last possible moment without making her look stupid?
The scenario involves four primary characters: Ariel (the MC), Vincent (Ariel's dad), Dom (Ariel's uncle / Vincent's brother), and Loegaire (the antagonist of the scenario, but not the book itself). Some ~17 years before the start of the book, Loegaire set out to kidnap a child from the human word after being cursed to never father one of his own; he wound up targeting the then-infant Ariel, but was thwarted by Vincent and Dom. Now Ariel has been taken into Faerie by the book's main villain, and she has met Loegaire and befriended him. It having been a long time since their initial encounter, and Loegaire being Fae (and thus immortal), he looks just the same as he did ~17 years ago while Ariel has grown from a newborn to an almost-17 year old woman.
The problem arises when I try to figure out who should know whom by sight. Originally I had Vincent repressing all memory of the baby-snatching attempt, and Dom never thinking to remind him of it (because it's not exactly good table conversation), but I've since reconsidered. Thing is, if Vincent does remember, and has raised Ariel to beware of the Fae in general (which is still the case regardless of whether Vincent remembers the specific incident or not), he would no doubt warn her especially against That One Fae who tried to take her away from him all those years ago. Vincent does not know Loegaire by name, but might very well remember his appearance, and would have let Ariel know about that too. Dom would be likely to remember him also. Ariel, having aged significantly, would be unrecognizable to Loegaire when they met for the second time, and it takes a while for him to figure out who she is, while she remains ignorant until it is pointed out to her by her father and uncle. Loegaire himself doesn't let on what he knows at all, since he knows Ariel wouldn't react well.
If I have Ariel recognize Loegaire on sight, even if it takes a while to click, that would destroy the relationship between them (strictly friendly/platonic) that arises from mutual ignorance, and it makes the pending reveal at the climax of the story basically nil. But it doesn't make sense for her not to at least have some nagging familiarity when she meets him in the first 1/4 or so of the story. Ariel isn't stupid; she knows her family has had only one personal encounter with the Fae prior to the start of the book, and that event was Loegaire's kidnapping attempt. If she's personally familiar, even distantly, with ANY Fae, it would be him or the lackey who had tried to help him (whose name is also unknown to Ariel and her family). Any idea how I can believably keep Ariel in the dark until the last possible moment without making her look stupid?