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Last night my brother showed me the trailer for the new Ninja Turtles movie. "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, Out of the Shadows". I gotta say it looked cool, I'll probably take my brother to see it. But I'd be more inclined and excited if they did a proper trailer.
Take a look:
Like I said it's a great trailer, I'll see it with my brother, but they could have done such a better job. They basically laid out the movie. A trailer should be like the back cover/inside flap of a book. Covering the who, what, where, when, why audience should care.
We saw a whole lot of who, moderate what, we already know where and when, the why...it seems like they're banking on the already established fans of the series.
As someone who took film classes I can tell you: a trailer should cover the core elements (the five W's) in scenes that are both telling and a bit suspenseful in a short time. A trailer, even a promo, is like the log line in picture form.
Using the above trailer, we didn't need to see the japanese suits or the punks before they obviously became Rhinos (there's a spoiler in the trailer, trailer shouldn't spoil!) all that was needed from those snaps shots, to get our attention, would be to see that fore arm raise and the shredder blades snap out.
I know the trailer is to send a message and entice people to come and see the movie. But it kinda defeats the purpose if you show them so much that they can piece things together or they go to the movie and say "Oh I know what's coming, I saw it in the trailer.".
Take a look:
Like I said it's a great trailer, I'll see it with my brother, but they could have done such a better job. They basically laid out the movie. A trailer should be like the back cover/inside flap of a book. Covering the who, what, where, when, why audience should care.
We saw a whole lot of who, moderate what, we already know where and when, the why...it seems like they're banking on the already established fans of the series.
As someone who took film classes I can tell you: a trailer should cover the core elements (the five W's) in scenes that are both telling and a bit suspenseful in a short time. A trailer, even a promo, is like the log line in picture form.
Using the above trailer, we didn't need to see the japanese suits or the punks before they obviously became Rhinos (there's a spoiler in the trailer, trailer shouldn't spoil!) all that was needed from those snaps shots, to get our attention, would be to see that fore arm raise and the shredder blades snap out.
I know the trailer is to send a message and entice people to come and see the movie. But it kinda defeats the purpose if you show them so much that they can piece things together or they go to the movie and say "Oh I know what's coming, I saw it in the trailer.".
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