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pmmg

Vala
Seems big and adventurous already. I like the big issue this introduces, and think it hints well at some big events that must have already occurred, and the task already seem very hard to accomplish. I am not sure the MC could keep the loyalty of his crew though. Seems he is off on a fool crusade without really informing them.
 

Zara Miller

New Member
Seems big and adventurous already. I like the big issue this introduces, and think it hints well at some big events that must have already occurred, and the task already seem very hard to accomplish. I am not sure the MC could keep the loyalty of his crew though. Seems he is off on a fool crusade without really informing them.
Thanks so much for your feedback!
 
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