Garren Jacobsen
Auror
I have a fledgling world swirling in my brain. In this world there are two alliances that are divided further into 5 and 6 countries each. The former is called the Alliance of the Crow and the latter is called the Alliance of the Eagle. These countries and alliances were all part of a grand empire and when the emperor died his scheming children all warred for their throne, he had 11 sons in case you were curious. What prompted this was that the Emperor never gave clear direction on who should rule. In fact his last words was that, "Sovereignty is to be given to..."
To further confuse the issue sovereignty is also a religious issue for these people with the rulers being often times considered at least mouth pieces of God if not demi-Gods themselves. Meaning that an uprising from the people, who have been taught this principle, would be unlikely.
The story's original intent will be a pulling down of the power structure and having the people rise up to power. What I have planned for this is that the protagonist, who is originally just a hired gun before he is a revolutionary, starts to tear down the idea that the rulers are chosen by God and then proceeds to inspire the idea of a representative republic. The republic will start in a single nation but will spread to every other nation as well like wildfire.
Also, magic is technically illegal, however the protagonist can control light and darkness and the rulers of these nations use his skills for thievery, assassinations and kidnappings. However, light and darkness cannot technically injure the target but hide the individual using them.
My question is this world so far believable? If there are parts that are not believable what would you do to improve them? Also how would you all further flesh out the governments at hand and what kind of republic would you have? I think it would be a federal system once all the countries are unified again, IE a system like the US or Germany. However, I think it will start off as a parliamentary system, IE UK and most other democracies. What do you all think?
To further confuse the issue sovereignty is also a religious issue for these people with the rulers being often times considered at least mouth pieces of God if not demi-Gods themselves. Meaning that an uprising from the people, who have been taught this principle, would be unlikely.
The story's original intent will be a pulling down of the power structure and having the people rise up to power. What I have planned for this is that the protagonist, who is originally just a hired gun before he is a revolutionary, starts to tear down the idea that the rulers are chosen by God and then proceeds to inspire the idea of a representative republic. The republic will start in a single nation but will spread to every other nation as well like wildfire.
Also, magic is technically illegal, however the protagonist can control light and darkness and the rulers of these nations use his skills for thievery, assassinations and kidnappings. However, light and darkness cannot technically injure the target but hide the individual using them.
My question is this world so far believable? If there are parts that are not believable what would you do to improve them? Also how would you all further flesh out the governments at hand and what kind of republic would you have? I think it would be a federal system once all the countries are unified again, IE a system like the US or Germany. However, I think it will start off as a parliamentary system, IE UK and most other democracies. What do you all think?