Gypzee
Dreamer
My character in the present day is recalling her past. I have a question how to write those scenes.
Laughing he said, "Ye think too hard about things." He kissed her forehead and then her lips.
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Laughing he says, "Ye think too hard about things." He kisses her forehead and then her lips.
Not a lot of difference, but yet is
Thanks for your input.
Laughing he said, "Ye think too hard about things." He kissed her forehead and then her lips.
-OR-
Laughing he says, "Ye think too hard about things." He kisses her forehead and then her lips.
Not a lot of difference, but yet is
Thanks for your input.