I'm pretty close to being finished with my latest novel. It's occurs in the afterlife, and it has sex scenes. It's not porn...I don't like the stuff, but it is quite explicit in places. One of my problems with all of my writing is how much description of what's going on in the scene around the characters do I include? I've been writing for years and have been published, but.... I also I have too much dialogue in other places. I know I need a sense of setting and that is there, but.... I'm at the point where I have to immerse myself in the scene, like as if I'm experiencing it myself and what exactly do I feel and see. My writing is fantasy, literary and magical realism. Any ideas?