The Journey of Mystery and Immortality Begins Here – City of Immortality

[mahmoud]

At the heart of City of Immortality, every step you take uncovers a mystery bigger than the last.
Ryan, the seeker of truth, ventures into a city haunted by the secret of immortality and an unforgiving curse.
Will he escape before the curse consumes him? Will he unravel the mystery of Alex, the girl who vanished years ago?
A journey full of surprises, strange alliances, and looming danger awaits you within the pages of this novel.
Don’t miss the chance to dive into a world where immortality is a weapon and danger never ends.

 

[Rexenm]

It is like a lot of popular ideas I have had. The abandoned orphan for example. There is a popular trope but the nondescript can oft times be seen as a joke. I am interested in where the immortal city comes from or the problem that seem insurmountable to it. Though I got a morose picture from it like it swirled in a perpetual storm with a ghost ship to accompany it I liked it.

is within the immortals a search for god I wonder what kind of rule they have

 

[mahmoud]

"I deliberately avoided speaking directly about religions or God in my story, because the focus was on human struggles and the quest for power within the immortal city. The rule in this city is not conventional; it is a despotic regime based on strength and tyranny, where injustice prevails and mercy is absent, causing the inhabitants to live in constant fear and insecurity."

 

[pmmg]

Seems like a good concept and setting. I'm not sure, if it was on a bookshelf next to a bunch of other books, if I would pick it up or not, but does sound interesting. Was there a question to this thread?

 

[xena]

I like the concept, especially the idea of immortality being a curse.

 

[mahmoud]

I'm glad you liked the concept!
The idea of immortality as a curse opens the door to deep emotional and phil

I like the concept, especially the idea of immortality being a curse.

osophical layers
what happens when time no longer matters, but pain still does?
If you're interested, I’d be happy to share more twists from the sto
ry!

 

[xena]

what happens when time no longer matters, but pain still does?

That’s an intersting perspective

If you're interested, I’d be happy to share more twists from the sto
ry!

Yeah I’d like to hear more.

 

[pmmg]

I'm glad you liked the concept!
The idea of immortality as a curse opens the door to deep emotional and phil


osophical layers
what happens when time no longer matters, but pain still does?
If you're interested, I’d be happy to share more twists from the sto
ry!

I would imagine suicide.

 

[mahmoud]

That’s an intersting perspective

Yeah I’d like to hear more.

Death was not the end here... but the forgotten dream we dream without ever waking.
In the city of immortality, no one dies, yet we all slowly dissolve, as if punished for still being alive

 

[mahmoud]

I would imagine suicide.

There is no suicide, only a struggle between betrayal, the forces of evil, and the last hope.