YoShoKenDai The Dragon
Minstrel
It seems that with the excitement to write chapters and immerse my readers in a world I have misplaced the story...I deeply need to flush out the development of characters which I've done poorly up to now...I wanted to leave a sense of wonder to my characters but I believe I've failed...now I've put my main character in a fight he shouldn't win..in a meeting that should impact him tremendously but something he is clearly not ready for...sigh...but I fear rewriting it.
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