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The Triverse Chronicles!

It begins at the top...at the very beginning. There is one God and there is one 'Evil'...fear creates everything, and Deities are created to fill Space, the three Best are the focus point...Wise Power, Ambitious Strength and Wanting Deceit. Deceit Cowers From strength, and deceives power. Deceit wins and attempts to destroy Strength until it is outsmarted by power, and faces strengths vengeance. Through this encounter they have forever mixed their fates together until the end of days.


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plasticroyal

Dreamer
I'm a little confused by this in all honesty and feel we'd be able to give more useful criticism if you were to expand on what you've already written above.
 
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