I recently let a friend read my profile entries. He's not a writer, but reader feedback is invaluable. He had literally nothing but good to say about it, but I'm not convinced in one aspect particularly, my dialogue. I spent a lot of time describing setting, putting 'links in the chain' as to emotion and so on but my dialogue was long. My characters just started talking a lot and it kind of feels unnatural. Do you guys suffer from this? Advice?