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Well, okay he's not "just" walking around but for what will probably be end up being something between the first fourth and third of my story he doesn't really have a goal or anything. He has adventures but they don't really build on one another in the way you'd expect a plot to. Its almost more like a series of episodic short stories about his travels interspersed between chapters about the other two POV characters and their plots.
Would this bother/annoy you as a reader or is it okay?
Would this bother/annoy you as a reader or is it okay?