(Context: B Follins is my writing coach (i guess its the correct term) and he posted a part of my story here. So, after i read the coments, i have rewritten it. So yea, now with that out of the way, here is the new version)
John woke up at the control panel, with a massive headache. After...
I started writing because i wanted to make my own story, and i wanted it to be amazing.
Still remember the day that i sat down with the intent of making a whole book, and started writing.
It was a disaster, but looking back, i realy didn't know how to write back then, so i guess its not that big...
So im a rather new both as a writer and to this site, alghtrough i have wrote some short stories that probably won't fit here. A short while ago i started to work on a medium lenght story, parts of wich i will probably be posting here to see if i can gather people's opinions on it.
So yeah, this...