Recent content by Fyle

Great thread, love the way the eyes stand out in the OP!

Pretty nice colors, moody. I would somehow make "Mark Stone" stand out a bit better...

I have not... and I live in Tokyo, so, ones held here will not quite be the same. I would imagine they would be mixed with all kind of anime and Japanese type fantasy.

This might be the wrong place to ask that question! Why don't you Google it, find a forum for it or call like, and arts and crafts supply store, maybe they know?

"Why are you so tough on me? Pata responded Should there be a period here? Or some other punctuation ?

Not every book can be balanced with perfect ethnic, gender, sexual choice, age or any other group that may be left out. IF the story is about a specific group, it some cases it may be best not to have diversity. For example : If I set my story in ancient Japan on the farthest northern...

It's a cover for an illegal operation that takes place in the basement. So... the culture behind it is all a front and can have limited detail. But... for the future. Nice line up of things to keep in mind!

I think that just about clears up what I wanted to know. I think my speculation was close to the answers you guys gave. I figure I want no less then 20k words. That seemed like a nice goal for a "novella." Thanks!

Wow. That was an incredible response, Crow. Thanks a lot! So, it is safe for me to at least use "nave" just to describe position. I just wanna avoid the word "room" or "hall" and try to get more technical terms.

I think a simple way to gauge this is when you start losing track yourself.

So, I have started to write a novella. To be honest, I have never read one and only have a rough idea what one "should" be. I am under the assumption that they are someplace around 30k words and... that's about all I know. Any general advice, thoughts, opinions anyone has about novellas...

Wow. Lots of good responses fast. Thanks... I guess I can change the word church but... I don't think church only means the building. Like there is the chruch of Scientology which isn't christian. So, Scientology is using it in this sense : Many people today understand the church as a...

Thanks for posting this. I was unaware! RIP... Liked him. And wow, 93...

Okay, so I am describing a church - but it is in my world and therefore not a "Chrstian" church... When I look up layouts of a church, I find these word commonly used "nave" and "chacel" BUT, they say for "Christian" churches. If I use one of these words, will the reader automatically get...

Dang its hard to get a critique partner... Answering this won't even bump it since it's been up almost a month and has hardly moved down the page....