"So it shall come to pass that the Ancient Soul shall once again weigh with a golden scale. When the pillars of the earth waver beware the tale it will tell. He who will be reborn will be but two half's of any coin and one yet many. His arrival will be marked with the blood of an ancient line...
The first sentence of a book is the most difficult to write. It sets the tone of the book and captivates the reader. I wrote it over and over and over...... Eventually after I edited 200 words away I re-wrote the first three chapters. It was easy because then you have a history! Just start...
One thing that I have learned about editing is that the responsibility for a manuscript still lies with the author. It is your work, watch over it like you would over a baby.
I love your forum. Eventually I found people with the same point of view. Would like to participate on a regular basis. Has published IMMORTAL, first book in the series, Keeper of the Gates. Has a movie studio interested. It is like climbing a mountain but it is worth it.:)