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    Swear words in Fantasy (Warning: Actual swear word examples in post)

    One character in my debut, a soldier, swears all the time and my (freelance) editor recommended I cut it down and only use occasional swearing for effect. But then there would have been no distinction from other characters, so in the end, I took it all out and explained early on that he swears...
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    Writing vs Reading

    Someone, is doing it on my Kindle Unlimited KENP read.
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    18th Century Ship of the Line

    Thanks for putting up the War at Sea articles, Aldarion. It was interesting to read them (and the Fantasy Avoids Gunpowder article) having written about Renaissance-era sailing ships and galleys in my debut. I'm pleased to say that many of my intuitions seem to fit with the facts as you present...
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    One of the interesting aspects of creating fantasy characters is the language they speak.

    Awkward matters of translation are usually brushed over in fantasy and sci-fi. In my debut, I took a contrary approach and put two bands of soldiers in a spot where they have to communicate through individuals who speak a common second tongue. Later, they develop a limited new vocabulary.
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    marketing for self published book

    Thanks, ThinkerX for the prompt - set up my Goodreads author profile. Any tips for the next steps?
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    Project Archangels

    Yes, that's what I was asking thanks. They take an eye-watering cut from your KDP 70% profit. My advice: run away and DIY.
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    A Promo Funny

    Back to promo funnies - UK query. I've taken a $40 punt to promote a Kindle UK £0.99 countdown deal with ebookdealstoday.co.uk - starting 07/28. I found them here - List of Promotional Sites for KDP Deals | Indies Today
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    Is there room for Science Fantasy?

    I read MZB's Stormqueen as a kid too, and I recently debuted with a science fantasy - perhaps more of a fantasy science. So, good luck to you and let me know when you find that small room.
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    A Promo Funny

    Thanks I meant a pleasant surprise rather than a complete one - 3 to 6 reviews are part of the deal so it's fair to say they are paid separately. I suspect the reviewers are told not to post anything if they can't bring themselves to give 4 or more stars. BookBub, Hello Books and the small...
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    A Promo Funny

    OK, I admit it. I paid their gold moron premium recently. I timed a $0.99 Kindle countdown deal to coincide with my summer holiday so that at the very least I'd get a sunlounger fool's paradise watching the sales figures. I was hoping to push up the sales ranks and generate 'natural' sales but...
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    Project Archangels

    If you can afford the fees, I hope you get a pleasing Christmas gift for family and friends. Before going with KDP, I checked out a vanity press mostly because it offered a free review (i.e. praise it to the skies) before they followed up with a professional hard sell. From a business POV, they...
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    Weapon for the Protagonist.

    One of my main characters is a skaldier, a soldier trained with a skalda. The skalda is an arquebus-like weapon charged with blastsalt, a crystalline explosive. A skalda cartridge holds two portions of blastsalt, each just above half the critical mass, separated by a paper disc - and a lead...
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    Good ways to start novels.

    My approach was to shatter MC normality in a prologue and then jump back during the opening chapters. This gave room to world-build with a hook in place.
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    What do you think is a good chapter length for a fantasy novel nowadays?

    I averaged 2000 words in my debut. It worked out that way though I worried the chapters were too short. Now I think that's the right size for an entertaining, easy-reading episode.
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    [Game] Last one to post wins!

    The next member to post be cursed with writer's block! (Trailing evil laugh...)
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