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    The Business Rusch: Stand Up for Yourselves

    I love Kristine Kathryn Rusch's blog. She wrote an e-book on how to be a freelancer/small business owner, and it was the best, most thorough advice on freelancing that I've ever read. She's started up a few different businesses, but since she's a writer just about everything in that book has...
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    Tracks, Chapter Eight: Rain and Mud

    "Who was he?" Phillip said. He looked no better than usual - the circles under his eyes were dark as bruises and the flesh hung loose from his cheeks. His rich velvet collar no longer hugged his neck and beads of sweat could be seen where his neck met his shoulders. He picked up his cup of wine...
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    Tracks, Chapter Eight: The Midsummer Festival

    A few days had passed before Jonathan and Eva saw one another again. Each morning the king sent a note with his deepest regrets, stating that he had urgent business to attend to. She was happier to take breakfast in her room with Kate. The Falconer was at the palace whenever his duties spared...
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    Tracks, Chapter Seven: The Return

    "I'm fine," Jonathan said through gritted teeth. His guard was helping him down the stairs of the office, hurrying him toward the coach while trying to aggravate his wounds as little as possible. Eva followed behind, with one guard at her side. Whether he was there to aid her or to keep her from...
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    Tracks, Chapter Six: The Clerk's Office

    The rain had begun in full force by the time Jonathan Lytra and his companion left the palace. The prince had dressed in the dark blue coat that signified a member of the armed forces. A shining medal proclaimed his identity, as though anyone could be in doubt. He wore three flintlock pistols...
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    Tracks, Chapter Five: A Morning of Captivity

    The next morning Eva and Kate attended the king promptly as he broke his fast. Their suite had, as promised, lacked for nothing, and the ladies were able to spend the night in physical, if not mental, comfort. Eva could not help but notice that the king ate very little for breakfast. The...
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    Tracks, Chapter 4: Midnight Meetings

    Siege City’s wealthiest quarter was a carefully constructed neighborhood of mansions, parks and gardens bisected by well-paved streets, a sudden oasis of calm on the edge of the urban sprawl. The wide avenues were lined with beech trees and here and there the front of some large estate...
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    Tracks, Chapter 3: Unrequested Visitors

    The mansion of Daniel Gallow was a stately work of classical architecture. His forefathers had seen much more in old-world charm and style than in the need to flaunt their wealth. But as the friends of the king, you didn’t have to show off much before everyone fell in to whatever trend you were...
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    Tracks, Chapter 2: Departures

    “Your mother doesn’t know you’re up, does she?” Lord Gallow leaned against the doorway, still in his evening attire. His smile hinted at conspiracy as he looked on his daughter. She was curled up in his favorite chair with a book propped on her knees. On the table beside her were several more...
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    Tracks, Chapter 1: Fire and Glass

    They spun through the air like snowflakes, glinting in the light and turning over and over as they fell. All around them the fire sent ripples of light over their sharp edges and turned the glass fragments into prisms. The blaze had become instantly uncontrollable. Whoever had planted the...
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    Need some advice on plot.

    Okay, this makes things a lot different. What I want to know now is a little more about Char. B's motivations. I remember that I ended up abandoning what was supposed to be a very groundbreaking and prestigious fantasy series because the main character raped a girl. After that I couldn't read...
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    ramon empire

    I can possibly answer a couple of questions on the empire in terms of its outer provinces, particularly Egypt.
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    What Makes a Title Great?

    I like this thread a lot, since I have trouble coming up with names for any piece. I used to judge a book based on the cover art quite often, but then I read somewhere (and I have no idea whether this was true, or still is in the ever-changing world of publishing) that authors, particularly new...
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    Need some advice on plot.

    I'm rooting for option 1. It sets up more conflict and has the promise of the most interesting payoff. Even if these two characters can settle some of their other differences, the circumstances of their marriage will be a cause for later guilt, self-righteousness and anger which will make later...
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