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    Writing the freakin story

    Memmorio, I think i've dealt with the same problem you have for a few years now. Come up with many many ideas, written outlines and character sheets, thought endlessly about ideas and ways to interlock secondary storylines but never actually took the time to do the actual writing. I eventually...
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    Any Baseball Fans?

    I've heard alot of people share these same sentiments about the strike chasing them away from baseball. And yes most people would gladly play baseball for the rest of their lives if it was an option. But the sad truth is that 99 percent of the population aren't good enough at it to play at the...
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    Black Death (starring SEAN BEAN!)

    I work at the largest big box retailer in the country and i've been looking at this movie since its release just wondering if it would be worth watching. After reading through this thread i've heard enough that i'm willing to give it a try. I also didn't notice it on netflix, but ill be sure to...
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    Problems with POV

    Thank you for the examples, it makes sense to give the character an internal monologue of his reactions to his surroundings. My hardest part is going to make sure that I am writing from the outside of the little brother's head. The examples you gave have given will be good to reference while im...
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    Three Things Thread

    1. I really don't think I like video games as much as I used to. I'm alright with it though on some level. 2. Having problems with your car is an extremely awful thing to deal with. 3. I love the fact that I may be in the final one percent of United States citizens who have never seen Avatar.
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    Problems with POV

    I believe this is the correct forum for this, please move if not and sorry. I'm a little over 10k words into my current project, and am still having a bit of trouble getting into the voice to write it correctly. First a little bit of background : The main protagonists are a pair of brothers...
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    i Hola!

    Lueco, I mostly buy all of my comics second hand at a local shop that sells them by the pound. One corner of the store has a rack that which has thousands of random comics on it. Then you dig through and get whatever you want to buy 2.99 a pound for the first 5 and than 1.99 for any additional...
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    Any Baseball Fans?

    Dante, yeah baseball has always been the main love of my life. But here in Detroit when the Lions are preparing for a new season the whole city is whipped into a frenzy and its hard to not get revved up. That Ubaldo trade was a big deal around here, since 90 percent of Detroit fans fell in...
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    i Hola!

    Hello Lueco, i'm new to these forums as well. I'll be sure to check out your novel. I read any Salvatore but I do read comics from time to time. What kind of comics do you like to read?
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    Any Baseball Fans?

    Hello everyone, its early August and that means that baseball season is really heating up. The good clubs are separating themselves from the bad ones and the pennant hunts are in full swing. I live 30 minutes to the north of Detroit and I live for the Tigers during baseball season. Were a team...
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    Reloading

    Thanks Joe, I hadn't done enough research into WWII era firearms to really know what I wanted to use, but you've given me alot to start with
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    Three Things Thread

    1. Ive worked in retail for 7 years and am constantly surrounded by people who act like it is the worst job in the world. I kinda like it though 2. I'm a sports fantatic. But despise soccer and hockey. Im from the Detroit area and may be the only non Red-Wings fan in the state. 3. This is the...
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    Dwarf Fortress

    My buddy just told me about Dwarf Fortress a few days ago, I see a lot of fun to be had in the game if only I can get a hang of the controls
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    Reloading

    The technology is around WWII, SMGs for the most part with some handguns and rifles. Since most of the characters are spraying alot of rounds I dont want to have to keep mentioning their reloading. I guess execution is the deciding factor in the whole thing. Donny : I didnt even think about the...
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    Reloading

    The piece I am working on now contains some heavy gun battles, the main characters do not normally carry weapons of their own. Instead they pick up guns as they go through the different settings using whatever they have available at the time. I'd like for one of the two to grow an attachment to...
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